Everybody likes different things but you want to balance what you want to be unique (characters are good to make unique as a starter) and what you want to make more universal and relatable (the theme of your story [like ‘underdog becomes the hero’ or ‘unattractive guy finally wins the girl’] and the terminology of sex are good here)
. What’s the conflict in the story? There literally isn’t one.
. Hank took out a hand gun from behind him, cocked it and aimed at her.
Everybody likes different things but you want to balance what you want to be unique (characters are good to make unique as a starter) and what you want to make more universal and relatable (the theme of your story [like ‘underdog becomes the hero’ or ‘unattractive guy finally wins the girl’] and the terminology of sex are good here)
. What’s the conflict in the story? There literally isn’t one.
. Hank took out a hand gun from behind him, cocked it and aimed at her.
Everybody likes different things but you want to balance what you want to be unique (characters are good to make unique as a starter) and what you want to make more universal and relatable (the theme of your story [like ‘underdog becomes the hero’ or ‘unattractive guy finally wins the girl’] and the terminology of sex are good here)
. What’s the conflict in the story? There literally isn’t one.
. Hank took out a hand gun from behind him, cocked it and aimed at her.